From elegies on tragedy of Karbala to lending her pen to causes and issues, Hina’s poetry is all about raising bars

Kulsum Mustafa
Kulsum Mustafa

By Kulsum Mustafa

Hina Rizvi Haider- it may not be a very known name on the Urdu Mushairas circuit, but it sure is a much loved and respected name in the hearts of all those who love reading good Urdu poetry. As a teenager, Hina, started her poetic journey by composing nauhas, (elegies written and recited as a tribute to the Martyrs of Karbala who sacrificed their lives to uphold justice) but over the years she been passionately lending her voice to all social issues and causes. Tyranny, violence, discrimination, gender inequality, name it and Hina has sensitivity dealt with the issues in her nazams for nearly four decades now.

As the month of Muhurram commensurate from 9th August this year this seems absolutely the most appropriate time to speak to this Sahibey bayaaz (one who writes dirges and alleges). Mother of two grown up off springs her husband is in the judicial service. This happy home maker is an example of nafsey mutmayena (contented person, who has control over her nerves). In a departure from the normal interview format at the end of this interview I will share some of Hina’s poems and let the readers be the judge of her poetic caliber.

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Q:  Tell us about your childhood and how you developed the love for writing.

A:  You can say that I have inherited and imbibed poetry, shairi is in my blood. My nana (maternal grandfather) Chaudhary Itrat Husain, ‘Aashiqui’, was a renowned and ‘sahib-e-diwan’ poet. My uncle  Chaudhary Qamar Hussain  also wrote poetry. Though both my parents did not write poetry but they were very fond of it and regularly attended  Mushairas and I tagged along with them to these enlightening mehfils.  My mother did her PhD under celebrated poet Waseem Barelivi. Also, there were nashists (poetic symposium) organized in house in which legendary poets like Rahat Indori recited their kalaam.

Q: Tell us about composing nauhas and salaam.

A: It is true that very early in life I started writing nauhas and salaam to pay my tributes to Hazrat Imam Husain and the 72 martyrs. I composed the rhythm for these pieces and I recited them myself at majlises. Appreciation from elders boosting my morale and over the years I started writing them every year on Muhurram. Quite a few of the Anjumans (groups) recite my verse, and it makes me very happy and thankful to Allah that he gave so much power to my pen that I can write on these most revered of humans. Maybe it is because of these mindsets that I have never felt very comfortable writing romantic poetry but lend my pen to causes and issues.

Q: Pandemic has shrunk the world. Mushairas have shifted from local to global. What do you have to say about this “from stage to online platform” shift.

A: I am absolutely delighted. This  is one aspect of the Pandemic that I  simply adore. I have always been a little hesitant in participating in mushiaras on stage, but online mehfils are fine. Sitting in my drawing room I have travelled to distant lands and shared my poetry. This global participation is especially a blessings for female poetesses. 

Q: How was your love of writing poetry received by your husband and your in-laws.

A; They love it and in fact they are the ones who goad me on whenever I slacken down. Mine was an arranged marriage, I was to adopt an entirely new environment and people. As I prepared to leave my familiar surroundings, I carried with me one of my most prized procession -the diary of my shaiyri. To my surprise I discovered that my husband too wrote poetry. He not only appreciated my verse but also encouraged me to continue nourishing this god gifted talent.  Many evenings we spend sitting together reciting our poems for each other. It kind of connected a happy bond that Mashallah has only got strengthened with time.

My in-laws, including my mother-in-law and sister-in-law, have also been very encouraging. They coax me to write and then insist that they become my first listeners.  I am truly lucky to have such people in my life who inspire and appreciate me so much. Now my children have joined this group. They appreciate what I write and are proud of my talent.

Every Muhurram I used to compose nauhas and recite them at majlises but for the last two Muhurram pandemic has stopped public gatherings. But this year I sure will compose and recite them maybe online majlises.

Q: Did the pandemic prove to be a boon for your poetry writing? Tell us about your lockdown creativity.

A; The first wave of the pandemic did motivate me to compose poetry. But the devastation it created in the second wave made me completely withdraw in my shell. I was so affected with all round human misery, loss of human life the helplessness and the pain that my pen just froze.

However, I must say it was a boon in the way that for the first time I participated in online mushairas and suddenly started enjoying it.I suddenly stepped into a much bigger world and I truly enjoyed this exposure.

Q: Tell us about your first book of poems Rangey Hina.

A: It is a my poetic diary from early compositions till date which were transferred into a book. It was done by a relative and printed in a hurry. As much as I appreciate his enthusiasm and appreciation I would like to work on the reprint with extra effort and make it more effective..  

Q: Does poetry comes to you all the time or is there any particular time of the day you write?

A:  I suppose it just happens. The good thing is that I can compose very fast. Like a  nazam take barely 15 minutes.  But this only happens when my mind gets signals to write. It sort of seems coming from inside. All I have to do is to put ink to these thoughts.

Q: Tell us about some of your favorite poems apart from your compositions on Muhurram

A: I have written on Nirbhaya, plight of migrant laborers, on children being mercilessly gunned down in a Pakistani school and of course my all time favorite on Bintey Hawa.It encompasses all the issues and taboos that concerns a woman. I feel I have done justice to my gender.

As promised in the beginning we hereby share some of Hina’s poetic works beginning with salaam which is dedicated to Hazrat Abbas, the brave grandson of Prophet Mohammed while he attempts to bring water  for the children from the Eupharates  river which was guarded and access to water denied for his family.


नज़र से तशना लबी की उतर गया दरिया

जरी की पाओं की ठोकर से मर गया दरिया

نظر  سے  تشنہ  لبی کی ٗ  اتر  گیا  دریا

جری کے پاٶں کی ٹھوکر سے مر گیا دریا

जो इब्ने साक़ी ए कौसर के लब न छू पाया

तो उनकी क़ब्र पे आकर ठहर गया दरिया

جو ابنِ ساقیء کوثر کے لب نہ چھو پایا

 تو  ان  قبر  پہ  آ کر  ٹھہر  گیا  دریا 

उठाया चुल्लू में हैदर के शेर ने जिस दम

सिमट के दस्त ए मुबारक में भर गया दरिया

اٹھایا چلو میں حیدر کے شیر نے جس دم

سمٹ کے دستٍ مبارک میں بھر گیا دریا

उतरते देख के जिस्मों से सर सरे साहिल

चमकते नेज़े की गर्दिश से डर गया दरिया

اترتے دیکھ کے جسموں سے سر سرے ساحل

چمکتے نیزے کی گردش سے ڈر گیا دریا

जहां पे मशक ए सकीना से गिर गया बाहर

वहां से शर्म से अब दूर तर गया दरिया

جہاں پہ مشکٍ سکینہ سے گر گیا باہر

وہاں ہاں سے شرم سے اب دور تر گیا دریا

‘हिना’ है दुनिया की वाहिद ज़मीने करबोबला

के जिस पे प्यास तो ज़िंदां है मर गया दरिया حنا ہے دنیا کی واحد زمین کرب و بلا

کہ جس پہ پیاس تو زندہ ہے مر گیا دریا

          Nirbhaya ke naam

Wahshiyon ke khel ne phir khel li ek zindagi

Maut ke aage hui majboor phir ek ‘Damini’

Usne bhi  chaha to hoga zindagi wo bhi jiye

Ghar se nikli hogi kitne khwab aankhon men liye

Uski bhi hogi tamanna koi thaame  uska haath

Zindagi men har qadam par de koi uska bhi saath

Ghar basayegi kisi ka chhor kar baabul ka ghar

Kab use maloom tha jana hai usko kis dagar

Kab pata tha usko kya hai uski qismat men likha

Dard ka kaisa samandar muntazir usko mila

Gham ke us sailaab men har khwab uska bah gaya

Waah ri himmat magar  hara na usne hausla

Zakhmi- zakhmi jism ka har dard wo sahti rahi

Phir bhi jeena chahti hai wo yahi kahti rahi

Maut uski saikdon aankhon men aansoo bhar gayi

Wo magar mar kar bhi hindustan zinda kar gayi

Azm karna hai ‘Hina’ ye aaj apne aap se

Phir koi bhi ‘Nirbhaya”  aise na marni chahiye


अजीब शै है ग़मे रोज़गार क्या कहिये

है जिसमें उम्र का हर पल शुमार क्या कहिये

कमाने रिज़्क़ जो हर रोज़ घर से जाते हैं

इसी ख़याल से आगे क़दम बढ़ाते हैं

के उनका ख़ून पसीना वो रंग लाएगा

जो उनके अपनों के रुख़ पर ख़ुशी सजायेगा

इसी लिए वो कभी मुश्किलों से डरते नहीं

कुछ अपने हाथों के छालों की फिक्र करते नहीं

मज़ा कुछ ऐसा मशक़्क़त में उनको आता है

जला के  ख़ुद को दिया जैसे जगमगाता है

मगर जब उनसे यही रोज़गार छिन जाए

के जब पसीने की क़ीमत न उनको मिल पाए

सुकूँ हो मौत में जीना अज़ाब लगने लगे

तमाम रौनक़ ए दुनिया सिराब लगने लगे

तो फिर दरख़्त की शाखों से लटके कुछ फंदे

और इनको चूमते मजबूर नातवां बन्दे

इन्हीं में मां की सुकूं बख्श गोद पाते हैं

लिपट के इनसे ही दुनिया को छोड़ जाते  हैं

ख़ुदा करे के किसी पर न ये घड़ी आये

किसी के हाथ की रोज़ी कभी नहीं जाए

दुआ ‘हिना’ की है हर घर में रोज़गार रहे

ज़माने भर में महकती सदा बहार रहे

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